Evolution_Carmageddon_Veseliy

[Veseliy]

hey guys, thanks for comments!

i made another render. No PS.

Now ill work on the "battle spirit" of the scene.

[BlackAdder]

hey guys, thanks for comments!

i made another render. No PS.

Now ill work on the "battle spirit" of the scene.

Looks great, I especially like the moving-blurs and such. It makes me feel like the car can crash upon an opponement any time now.. .
But perhaps the car is driving too straight. Give it a little angle and maybe you should let it drive over a little bump or carpart or such..

Greetings,
Nils

[Veseliy]

BlackAdder

thanks, man.
here another two renders with angled car and crashed bridge. hope u like it. :clown:

[X-Ice]

yeah man that's really great

I love it!!!:buttrock: :buttrock: :buttrock:

[BlackAdder]

BlackAdder

thanks, man.
here another two renders with angled car and crashed bridge. hope u like it. :clown:

winner for sure (really carmageddon styled)
I really don't want to see that driving straight to me :scream::scream::scream:

The only thing left to do, if you ask me, is to improve the backdrop quality and make sure your bridge doesn't stop as suddenly as it does now.
Perhaps you could mirror the bridge and leave a gap between both, so it looks like your vehicle just made a jump..

Great job!

[Veseliy]

I really don't want to see that driving straight to me :scream::scream::scream:

The only thing left to do, if you ask me, is to improve the backdrop quality and make sure your bridge doesn't stop as suddenly as it does now.
Perhaps you could mirror the bridge and leave a gap between both, so it looks like your vehicle just made a jump..

Great job!

haha, ure reading my thoughts!!! :clown:

thats what i made in the following renders.

really glad u like my beast!!! thanks to all again.

i will change my background image when i find a good one

also i added more light so now it looks much better for me(previous was too dark).

ok enough talking, here they are!

[Veseliy]

hey guys, i updated the environment, added rust on the bridge. And played with lighting.
so what do u think?

[et_fone_home]

Dosent look like rust, it in tooo big patches, try make it less and more spreaded along edges not in the middle. but too much blur for me.

[Veseliy]

no, i dont think that patches are too big. Maybe the color isnt really right...

but too much blur for me

i will reduce it

[et_fone_home]

also, i never seen a bridge with sooo much rust, if it did, i would fall , try and add more dramatic props

[Veseliy]

take a look at this picture. It has maybe not so much, but big amount of it.

anyway thanks for the crits, i will reduce it

[Gearstix]

that has to be the crazyiest evo i have ever seen. You should have a rocket firing in one photo. BTW, whats carmageddon if you don't mind explaining:banghead:

[Veseliy]

hey, thanks man!

carmageddon is an old PC game. The point is to crash your opponents with your car(like my evo style, but without weapons, only by crash). :deal:

[Gearstix]

ah i have played a game similar to that. the back part remids me of a pickup truck. lol. its pretty crazy. Try some studs on the tires, big ones.
I saw in a Bond movie i think, where a laser cut the car boddy from the chassis, and it was a police car. The body kept going.. it was quite hilarious.
Oh, put a canister on the rear with nails in it. may blow out some tires.

I'd like to build one of these but I cant model a car. I am gonna start a tut.
I can make parts tho. made steering wheels, exhausts and coilovers.

Good luck to ya.

EditL try crammin two small jet engines in the rear somewhere for a little boost!

[Gary_Ice]

Hi! If I am not too late with the Idea:
You asked for what to do with the headlight. Maybe you can creat a cage for it like the front part of the car (Sorry dunno name of that air intake part).
It is reminds me a beast's teeth. It could break the top parts smooth a bit.

Richard