Oscar's rendering thread

[mynameisoscarjo]

Hi,

thought I would start a new rendering thread for my cars, just to not dig up my old threads with new renders. Comments and critics on the renders are welcome (though not on the models, please) .

Starting out with a speedy matte white Aston Martin V12.

[EquiNOX]

It could blend nice if you add environment reflection or shadows of tree /shurbs...

[P2sta]

agree, the reflections doesn't fit with the background too much, but it's nice start

[mynameisoscarjo]

Thanks, here is an updated render with more reflections. The shadows from the trees would be blurred out (?) so I didn't do any.

[mynameisoscarjo]

Also, I have set up a new scenery. Tell me your opinion.

[DaveCox]

Those last two really don't work.

Car doesn't fit the backplate - colours are way too saturated.

the car doesn't look planted and the reflections seem to be missing.

you have some nice geometry man, I look forward to watching you improve. We know you can do better

[beacon1]

Also add a simple interior to add more realism than an opaque windshield.

[mynameisoscarjo]

There already are. Just a bit too much IOR on the windshield.

[mynameisoscarjo]

Here is my latest render, C & C are welcome

[bloodyzyy]

Very good, but still one critic - image is to sharp. I like your scene, good work. Keep it up mynameisoscarjo.

[mynameisoscarjo]

Thanks man. I'll crank up the AA settings and tweak it some more.

[mynameisoscarjo]

I tweaked it some more... unedited and edited render. C&C are welcome.

[kriscabrera]

its good progress a couple things i notice are the sky, you need to find a hi rez sky with a better sense of scale because it making your scene look really small, i think your car paint could use some love also. Good progress keep it going!

[Qualt]

nice work, looks like it have potential, but you should fix some things, like the grille, is strange, I supposse that is for the AA, also check the materials of it, and the windows, they are transparent , it seems that you don't have an interior, do you?. About the sky I like the tone of it, I think that the strange part is the bottom, it gives at the picture the sentation that the bridge is reaaaally high, like in the sky, for those big clouds there. And a last thing to correct is the car position, I would center it to the picture a bit more, specially if you are going to add motion blur...
Keep working dude

Regards, saludos
Qualt

[mynameisoscarjo]

A last render of my previous scene (was not my best performance).

Also, I'm trying to do some nice renders with the free HDRI sample pack from hdri-locations.com.