Mercedes-Benz SLS AMG 2011

[mynameisoscarjo]

I liked the first one better.

[Sandorm]

The last render got some white dots at the back

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[P2sta]

looks great, but somehow I don't like the headlight...not sure why, maybe the glass material

[toub]

Hey there, over all it looks very good. I have to agree with P2sta about the headlights though, might be the material or maybe it's the reflection but it doesn't feel 100%. The materials on your rims could use a bit of adjustment as well. The studio set up is well executed but I would like to see something with a theme to it, might just be the angle that is a bit bland if you know what I'm saying. I'm missing some drama! You are so close to something really great Keep it up!

Here's some inspiration: Link 1 Link 2 Link 3 Link 4

[Toivo]

Thanks, good examples)
test render (without post-production)

[Minde]

Render looks really good, but I'm missing fillets on car itself, now all edges, especially where front bumper meets other parts, are just too hard they don't go like this, maybe in some areas does.

[Toivo]

I have trouble with welding vertex... thanks, I don't notice. And I'll add more hardness to the edge. If I understand correctly..

[PBenjamim]

The problem is they are too hard. You have to soften the edges, especially on the front.

[Toivo]

I made the corners of bumper more softer. And... I will do another scene =) This will be enough

[PBenjamim]

Attached a picture explaining, hope you don't mind. I think this model has really good potential to turn out awesome, you just need to fix these little things imo

[Minde]

Attached a picture explaining, hope you don't mind. I think this model has really good potential to turn out awesome, you just need to fix these little things imo

I mean exactly the same as you said in the picture...

[beacon1]

Aside from what Pbenjamim mentioned i think the deails on the headlights LEDs need some tweaks, its not covered with a flat glass, check the attachment.

[Toivo]

I did all of edges softer and added the smoke)
beacon1, thanks, I will fix it later

[Briex]

Tyres are getting a strange light...only the front one..seems it has some glow but maybe is the smoke effect! anyway...really great job Toivo!

[Domino]

looks good very coool image
but the tires (rubber) looks strange, like its too reflective or it have high specular, not sure