Oxydo`s renders

[mynameisoscarjo]

Try to make the shadows under the car more blue! And maybe the paint shader is a tad too reflective.

[oxydo]

Mynameisoscarjo...I listened to your advice and tried to make a shadow more blue.....also I changed the color of the car.
Perhaps picture is a little too bright but I did this in linear workflow gama 2,2 so on CRT monitors probably looks better than on the LCD-s.....It is always the problem of how to make a render that looks ok on all monitors .
Tell me what you guys think ?

[Qualt]

I think that it has potential. But you should fix some things like:
-The logo of audi in the front seems like a texture
-The tyres looks fake.. I don't know to much about snow but check some references and they aren't full of snow... I would add some texture to it
check it
http://www.drivingadvice.org.uk/Imag...ompression=100
and also the snow is cold water and it gives more reflection to the tyre doing it shiner and darker and looking wet
-The lighiting is ok but I would move the light a bit nearer to the horizon
-And to give to it a more atractive look I would rotate the car a bit, and also the front wheels
Waiting your next update

P.S.: I would like to do a post work on it if you don't mind
Regards, saludos
Qualt

[oxydo]

I think that it has potential. But you should fix some things like:
-The logo of audi in the front seems like a texture
-The tyres looks fake.. I don't know to much about snow but check some references and they aren't full of snow... I would add some texture to it
check it
http://www.drivingadvice.org.uk/Imag...ompression=100
and also the snow is cold water and it gives more reflection to the tyre doing it shiner and darker and looking wet
-The lighiting is ok but I would move the light a bit nearer to the horizon
-And to give to it a more atractive look I would rotate the car a bit, and also the front wheels
Waiting your next update

P.S.: I would like to do a post work on it if you don't mind
Regards, saludos
Qualt

Thanks for the suggestions and reference picture , that with tire and snow, I'll try to fix it with texture,regarding lighting, unfortunately I can not do much, HDRI contains sun, which determines light position
I thought to put driver and make motion blur on wheels but then I need to make snow, which are released when driving,and that I have not figured how to make it to look realistic

No problem for the post , you just tell me mail and I will send you 32 bit EXR file when I finish rendering

[Qualt]

ok but for the post I just need just .jpg file with that is enough... so the next time that you update will be ok
here is something really quick adjusting some things

AUDI TTS on snow HI res 2.jpg

Regards, saludos
Qualt

[mynameisoscarjo]

I liked oxydo's saturated render more.

[Briex]

me too...oxydo's was better, even if that car feels a bit strange to me, like if there's a bit of perspective mistake...i'd decrease of a couple of points the focal distance...give it a try Oxydo....just a small small render....and please, i hate strecthed logos XD could u fix it? is a little detail, but spoils the whole image

[Qualt]

I just wanted to help

Regards, saludos
Qualt

[mynameisoscarjo]

I just liked the saturated sky of the original image, that's all. You did a nice flare there at the headlight tho, how do you do those?

BTW oxydo, very nice improvement on the render. I liked how the blue-ish shadows turned out. I don't think it's overexposed at all. KIU

[Briex]

I just wanted to help

Regards, saludos
Qualt

LOL Qualt don't worry! u did i think is because the sky became too dark pressing down the car..is just a mental thing...and yeah..flare looks good

[oxydo]

Thanks guys for the constructive discussion. Each of you has a good observation, Briex I will see about focal distance ,pity that in the picture info is no data on lens , mynameisoscarjo thx , blue-ish shadow now fit much better in environment ....by the way Qualt really nice flare.

I made another one HI res render last night,but I am not satisfied, I experimented with paint shader and in my opinion it turned out bad.... Problem with this HDRI is that is not typical ,the snow is brighter then sky and is like a lot more light coming from below. than from above..and that is a problem ...what are some of you noticed..... and which Im trying to solve
The good thing is ,I corrected stretched texture

[oxydo]

Here I made a few corrections that you suggested I am not sure about this color, but I just have to experiment .... and I've already added flare ......perhaps too much photoshop ? maybe ,but without that picture would be pretty boring.

[mynameisoscarjo]

It's looking very nice. I liked the previous car paint better though, it suited the background image better. I'd change back, or try a white or black one. Other than that, you've only improved IMO. Might wanna make the image a little less bright, though.

[TOUGH]

I tried using that HDR set and could never get it to look right the sky should be on the car...not a fan...I haven't tried the school one he posted yet!

[oxydo]

This color is probably better....here virtually no photoshop,almost as directly from vray frame buffer I just converted EXR to JPG.
I think I will upload this rendering to the gallery