BMW 3 330i

[Ney0]

thats looking sweet man

[EquiNOX]

Look nice.. Keep going.

[Paps]

thx guys

now, i have done abit more, and dont mind back end cause some bumps "in detailing and cleaning stage". if you see any errors pls point them out

[Paps]

this rear is giving me much problems

[theshaddix]

It's good overall, but you need to fix those things i painted on the image.
It's almost advanced, but not quite. Remember that you can't have 2 edges on one door and start the second door with 3 (just an example). And the wheel arches are not round. In some areas you have too many edges that you do not even need. And the badge on the hood is a tricky part because the main badge (the bmw logo) is absolutely flat, means that it's not bent in any way, while the hood part (the outside area of the round shape (for the badge) is not flat: it follows the main surface flow. Fix it and it'll be in the advanced section quickly.

[Paps]

thx theshaddix, really appreciate it

will fix those edges as soon as i have time
and thx for badge reference

[Paps]

okay did those things, and reworked badge "hole"

[EquiNOX]

Thanks Shaddix, for pointing out something on paps bmw... Thats something I didn't know and its benefical for me to know.

[theshaddix]

Sure. But you didn't really understand that badge thing: your sides of the round thing are smaller than your up and bottom areas while it should be the other way around. The hood has a round shape, not flat, so how r u gonna put a flat badge on it without it's up and bottom not touching the hood at all ? What you do is you modify your hood round area so you make the top and bottom smaller, therefore you flatten out that area so your badge can sit 100% in it. Hope you get it now. ALso, after ur modifications, you need to redo your chamfer/bevel on the edge of the round shape because look at it right now (the last edge of the 3 needs to be redone).
I still see some areas where you have one part with 4 edges and the one next to it with 3 and so on. You need to make it all the same to have a 100% flow.

[Paps]

okay badge part

[Paps]

okay i started back bumper
this is what i have done sofar:

[Paps]

had abit more time so made some new things

[Paps]

did abit more
still need to tweak abit
c&c welcome

[Paps]

okay since there is no coments, here is small update

[Paps]

had some free time, and was repaiting the shape abit, rear bumper still needs a line and a still dont know how to make it "thinking"